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Post by Okora on Sept 21, 2020 7:27:05 GMT -8
NAME: Breaker Strike Describe what your attack looks like and does.: Okora rapidly charges towards an opponent and Unleashed a barrage of Ki infused punches and kicks with the intent to either knock out or cripple an opponent by targeting either the limbs or the head or the limbs. It's a barrage of Ki infused kicks and punches Type: Physical Melee Barrage Action: Standard Action Base Damage: 4d6+4 Base Damage Major Effect: Bashing ((The target of this attack loses 5 ki and -5% of their Base Power Level on hit. The maximum Base PL loss from all sources is 50%)) Minor Effect: Crippling ((This technique has a 40% chance to inflict Cripple on hit, Physical Attacks only)) Cost: 20 Ki Learn: 2 weeks
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Post by Cayle Pota on Sept 21, 2020 8:16:36 GMT -8
The pricing is 20 Ki, but that's correct. Damage/Bashing/Crippling are all fine, as is the type and action - though I'd edit in what Crippling and Bashing actually do and so you know that Crippling only provides a 40% chance of immobilize. Beyond that, put 'Breaker Strike' in the area where it says 'Name', and the description in the area where it says 'describe what your attack looks and does'.
That said, the 'cripple and finish off stronger opponents', bit doesn't really need to be there. Just that it's a barrage of ki infused punches and kicks, as the targets themselves cna change per fight, too. Which actually reminds me, Type should be 'Physical Melee Barrage'.
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Post by Okora on Sept 21, 2020 18:52:32 GMT -8
The pricing is 20 Ki, but that's correct. Damage/Bashing/Crippling are all fine, as is the type and action - though I'd edit in what Crippling and Bashing actually do and so you know that Crippling only provides a 40% chance of immobilize. Beyond that, put 'Breaker Strike' in the area where it says 'Name', and the description in the area where it says 'describe what your attack looks and does'. That said, the 'cripple and finish off stronger opponents', bit doesn't really need to be there. Just that it's a barrage of ki infused punches and kicks, as the targets themselves cna change per fight, too. Which actually reminds me, Type should be 'Physical Melee Barrage'. How's that? I hope I got it right this time.
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Post by Melody on Sept 21, 2020 19:29:56 GMT -8
Approved. I edited the learn time. You were most likely looking at the signature techniques which can only be unlocked when you reach a specific reputation and follows a different template. Please update your character sheet with the changes.
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