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Post by Treble on Sept 10, 2021 16:22:41 GMT -8
NINE TIMES Eight shadow doppelgangers dash from Musashi's body to relentlessly assault his opponent. If they can catch an opponent in the air or on the ground, then they can carry them in a combo effect. The combo ends when the real Musashi dashes through his enemy with his Twin Tails. Type: Physical, Melee, Finisher Action: Standard Action Base Damage: 5d8+10 Major Effect: Embolden: After using this technique, increase your Accuracy modifier with all Basic Techniques by +10 for 2 turns; this does not compound with itself. Minor Effect:
Imbued: This technique is now a Melee Energy attack and uses the Fighting Skill to determine its Accuracy, but increases its Ki cost by 2. This may be added alongside another Minor Effect, but may not be taken with Projectile.
Wounding: This technique has a 40% chance to inflict Wound on hit.
Cost: 35 Ki Learn: 2 weeks.
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Post by Cayle Pota on Sept 12, 2021 0:55:28 GMT -8
Same as with the other on needing the 2 week learn time; though this one also needs some 'ifs' added into the description, it's written now as if it automatically hits, which it obviously doesn't. And while it might sound like it's silly to be concerned about a description, they do matter.
After it's written with an 'If' before the 'They', and it has the 2 week learning time, this is approvable.
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Post by Treble on Sept 12, 2021 7:16:48 GMT -8
Updated.
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Post by Cayle Pota on Sept 13, 2021 15:08:21 GMT -8
Approved.
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